Last term we looked at narrative story writing and the features of a fairy tale. We also created a 'Wanted' poster for the Big Bad Wolf. Below are some of our examples and others can be viewed in our classroom.
Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood got her basket. She picked some flowers and the wolf came.
“Is that you Little Red Riding Hood?”
He put Grandma’s hat on and then the wolf got to get Little Red Riding Hood. The woodchopper came and chopped the wolf’s head off and they lived happily ever after.
By Bella-Rose
Once upon a time there was a girl called Little Red Riding Hood. She lived with her mother and father in a tiny cottage. One day her mother said,
“Your nana is ill. Stay on the trail and don’t talk to strangers.”
“Ok, mother”
So away went Little Red Riding Hood into the forest. The Big Bad Wolf crept up behind her. He said,
“Where are you going?”
Little Red Riding Hood said,
“I am going to my nana’s house to see her.”
“Ok” said the Big Bad Wolf. He took a short cut to her nana’s house. The Big Bad Wolf knocked on the door.
“No one here,” said the wolf, “It’s not Little Red Riding Hood.” And they lived happily ever after.
By Pyper
Once upon a time there lived a little girl and her name was Little Red Riding Hood. She lived with her mother and father in a cottage in the forest. Her mother made her a hood and cloak and that was why she was called Little Red Riding Hood. One day her mother said to Little Red Riding Hood,
“Go and take this to you grandma who is ill.”
There were lots of things. There were cupcakes, a cake and cherries. Her mother gave her instructions not to talk to strangers but she was not listening. She just said,
“Yes mother, I will.”
On the way, she met a big bad wolf. He said in his sweetest voice,
“Where are you going to little girl?”
“I am going to my Grandma’s house because she is ill. In this basket I have some yummy food to strengthen her.”
Little Red Riding Hood carried on. The Big Bad Wolf had a plan. He took a short cut to Grandma’s house. The Big Bad Wolf knocked on the door and said in his sweetest voice,
“Hi Grandma, it’s Little Red Riding Hood.”
But it was not Little Red Riding Hood so Grandma hid in the cupboard. Then Little Red Riding Hood knocked on the door. The wolf said,
“Come in, my dear.”
So Little Red Riding Hood went in. The Big Bad Wolf jumped out of bed. Little Red Riding Hood started to run around the room. Just then a woodcutter came in the door. He cut the wolf’s head off. They lived happily ever after.
By Neve
Once upon a time there was a little girl named Little Red Riding Hood. She lived with her mother and father in a cottage in the woods. One day Little Red Riding Hood’s grandmother was ill. So Little Red Riding Hood took some food to her grandmother’s. Her mum gave her the food and Little Red Riding Hood went wandering off to her grandmother’s house. On the way she met a wolf, a big bad wolf. He said,
“Where are you going?”
“I am going to my grandmother’s house on the other side of the woods.” she said.
“Well, if you’re going to your grandmother’s house, she would like some flowers too. Why don’t you stop and get her some?”
Little Red Riding Hood had forgotten what her mother had said to her before she went. So she went to pick some flowers while the wolf snuck ahead of her. When the wolf got to Granny’s house, he knocked on the door and said,
“Hello Grandmother,” in his best voice, “it’s Little Red Riding Hood here at the door.”
“Come in.” said Granny.
So the wolf went inside and upstairs to Granny’s bedroom. He pounced at Granny. She jumped out of her bed and locked herself in her closet.
Then the Big Bad Wolf jumped into bed and put on Granny’s glasses and gown and hopped into bed. Then Little Red Riding Hood got to Granny’s house. She knocked on the door,
“It’s Little Red Riding Hood at the door.”
“Come in.” said the wolf.
Little Red Riding Hood went upstairs to Grandmother’s bedroom. She said,
“What big eyes you have got, Granny!”
“All the better to see you with, my dear.”
Little Red Riding Hood said,
“What big teeth you have!”
“All the better to EAT you with!” growled the wolf,
He jumped out of bed and pounced on Little Red Riding Hood with his paws. She jumped forwards and started to run around the house when a woodcutter walked in the door. He chopped off the wolf’s head and they lived happily ever after.
By Jasmine
Once upon a time there lived a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood. She lived with her mum and dad in the forest on one side. Her grandma lived on the side of the forest. In the middle of the forest lived a wolf. One day Little Red Riding Hood’s mum said,
“Take this to Grandma’s but don’t go off the path.”
“Okay Mum.”
Away she went. She wanted to pick flowers so she did. Then she went to Granny’s. On the way she saw a wolf.
“How are you little girl? Where are you going?”
“To Grandma’s, ok?”
When Little Red Riding Hood got to Granny’s house, she went in.
“What big teeth you have!”
“All the better to eat you with!” said the wolf and he jumped out of bed and started to chase Little Red Riding Hood. A woodcutter came in and caught the wolf. And they lived happily ever after.
By Hunter
Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood went to her grandma’s place. On the way Little Red Riding Hood picked some flowers. She met a big, bad wolf. The Big Bad Wolf asked Little Red Riding Hood,
“Where are you going, Little Red Riding Hood?”
“I am going to my grandma’s place.”
The Big Bad Wolf took a short cut and the wolf got to Grandma’s house first. When Little Red Riding Hood arrived she knocked on the door and said,
“Hello, Grandma. Oh what big teeth you have!”
“All the better to eat you up!”
The Big Bad Wolf chased Little Red Riding Hood around the room. A woodcutter came and chopped the wolf’s head off. And they lived happily ever after.
By Scarlett
Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood lived in a forest and her grandmother was sick. Her father was cutting wood. He chopped the Big Bad Wolf's head off and they lived happily ever after.
By Luke
Once upon a time there was a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood. She lived with her mum. She said,
“Your granny is ill,”
So Little Red Riding Hood took a basket. On her way to Granny’s, she met a wolf. The wolf said,
“Pick her some flowers.”
Then the wolf took a short cut to Granny’s house. He knocked on the door. The wolf ran inside. Granny hid inside the closet. The wolf went into the bed. Then Little Red Riding Hood came inside. She said,
“Why Granny, what big teeth you have?”
“All the better to eat with!”
Then a woodcutter chopped the wolf’s head off. Then they lived happily ever after.
By Tyler
1 comment:
Great story writing room 3! I love the posters on the wall, they all look awesome.
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